“Ryan, you have fallen asleep in class again,” Mr Tan said sternly.

I lowered my head in embarrassment. I had been performing poorly in school and spent most afternoons playing computer games instead of studying. During Physical Education lessons, I would also become breathless after running only a short distance. My teachers and parents were worried about me.

One day, Mr Tan spoke to me after class. “You are capable of doing much better, Ryan. Improvement starts with small steps,” he encouraged.

His words stayed in my mind. That evening, I decided to make a change. I created a study timetable and limited my gaming time to one hour a day. I also started exercising every evening at the park. At first, it was difficult. I was tired and often felt like giving up. However, I reminded myself of my goal and persevered.

Weeks turned into months. Gradually, I became more disciplined. My grades improved, and I could run longer distances without feeling exhausted. My teachers noticed the difference, and my classmates even asked me for study tips.

At the end of the year, I was called onto the stage during Prize-Giving Day. To my surprise, I received the Character Award for showing determination and perseverance.

As I held the certificate in my hands, I felt proud of how far I had come. I realised that improvement does not happen overnight. With hard work, discipline and determination, anyone can become a better version of themselves.

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How to Plan and Write This Composition

Step 1: Understand the Pictures

The pictures show:

1. A student sleeping in class → poor habits, lack of focus, poor performance.

2. A child exercising with a hula hoop → effort to improve health and discipline.

3. A Character Award certificate → recognition for positive change.

The theme is self-improvement through determination and hard work.

Step 2: Create a Storyline

Beginning

• Introduce the problem.

• The student is lazy, unhealthy, or doing badly in school.

Rising Action

• A teacher, parent, or friend encourages the student.

• The student decides to change.

Climax

• The student faces difficulties while improving.

• He/she wants to give up but continues.

Resolution

• Improvement becomes visible.

• Better grades, healthier lifestyle, improved attitude.

Ending

• Receives an award or praise.

• Learns an important lesson.

Step 3: PSLE A1 Composition Structure

Paragraph - Purpose

Introduction - Introduce problem

Rising Action - Encouragement and decision to improve

Climax - Challenges faced during improvement

Resolution - Results of hard work

Ending - Award and reflection

Step 4: Use A1 Vocabulary

Feelings

• Embarrassed

• Determined

• Frustrated

• Encouraged

• Proud

Useful Expressions

• “His words echoed in my mind.”

• “I was determined to turn over a new leaf.”

• “Every small step brought me closer to my goal.”

• “Hard work eventually paid off.”

• “Perseverance is the key to success.”

Moral

True improvement comes from determination, self-discipline and the courage to change for the better.

A1 Planning Mind Map

Problem

• Sleeping in class

• Poor grades

• Unhealthy lifestyle

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Action Taken

• Study timetable

• Less gaming

• Daily exercise

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Challenges

• Tired

• Tempted to quit

• Slow progress

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Improvement

• Better grades

• Better fitness

• Better attitude

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Result

• Character Award

• Pride and confidence

• Valuable life lesson