Write about a time when you made a surprise visit.

I smiled to myself as I imagined the look on Diana’s, face when I stand before her. I had completed the project and was going home on one month leave. I was eager to marry Diana; and go off on another project. When I told Diana’s mother my plan to return the following day, she laughed non-stop; I wondered why. Through her laughter, I asked her not to tell her daughter my impending return the following day.

I rang the doorbell. I could hear the squeaks from my future mother-inlaw’s wheelchair, as she moved towards the door. When the door opened, I went in and hugged her and asked where Diana was. She pointed to Diana’s room with her chin and wheeled away, laughing all the while.

I knocked the door softly. There was no response. I knocked again, louder. Again, no response from within. I kept knocking non-stop and called her name; then I heard sobbing behind the door. I kept calling and knocking, and realised I was shouting. Then suddenly, I heard Diana; she said, “Go away!” I was shocked. Then I heard the familiar squeak of the wheelchair and turned around. Laughing all the while, Diana’s mother handed me the room key, and wheeled away, still laughing.

I inserted the key, turned it, and pushed. The door would not budge; apparently someone was pushing against it. I pushed again; with my shoulders this time and pleaded, “Please Sweetheart, please open the door.” Thoughts of calling the SCDF crossed my mind, but I decided that persuasion was the better option. “How did she get so strong in just two years?” I wondered. Suddenly the door yielded, and I found myself racing across the room; and if the bed had not been in the way, would have sailed out the window. I landed on the bed and turned to look; and got

the shock of my young life!

A sumo wrestler version of my beloved was standing over me! I waited for her to explain, and whispered, “What happened, Sweetheart?” She started sobbing again, “I missed you and ate like crazy. I will slim down; I will go on a diet; I will swim and jog every day; I promise,” she said.

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